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Post by Puggalo4Lyfe on Jan 8, 2016 2:42:48 GMT
ahahah
*sip*
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Post by G I L L I G A N on Jan 8, 2016 2:56:26 GMT
shagg, post more of the story.
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Post by shagg on Jan 10, 2016 18:04:09 GMT
Bulma offering Goku a ride allows them to give background on the characters: Bulma can explain capsule corps, that shes a big fan of the dragon ball legends and wants to see the dragon one day, Goku that he wants to fight in the tournament, that he has a family.
they arrive to the tournament, its crowded and bustling like a coliseum. goku and bulma are in the lobby and it appears that theyre just in time, if anything late. Goku has to immediately start a physical and class inspection to compete in the tournament. waiting around, Goku and bulma overhear about a mystery fighter, someone who looks like hes from a different planet. its yamcha speaking to Tien (but you only see the back of his head). goku leans over and happily inquires about the fighter yamcha seems about to indulge Goku, but Tien turns around and scoffs, and tells Yamcha that Goku is competition. theyre about to leave when--
the whole time, names have been getting called out for fighters to step up, get weighed, and have to punch a bag or break 50 bricks to be able to enter. before the homies Tien and Yamcha can diss Goku and leave, Piccolo's name gets called. And a clear alien green person gets up, juxtaposed to all the humans. Goku, Tien and Yamcha all take notice. Piccolo performs the brick breaking test in a bad ass way... he breaks the breaks with one finger or something. something happens that makes Piccolo stand out further. The brick dust is all in the air, shrouding Piccolo. as the dust settles, Goku and Piccolo are locked in eye combat.
Bulma inquires, "hey wow who is that guy???" "whys hes green? wheres he from?" goku doesnt respond.
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Post by Tempest on Jan 11, 2016 1:17:37 GMT
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Post by Tempest on Jan 11, 2016 1:17:54 GMT
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Post by shagg on Jan 12, 2016 17:51:36 GMT
I want to edit that above post and show a regular person get tested, then Tien, THEN Piccolo just as i wrote. I'm interested in establishing Tien as a more serious character and human rival of Goku, as they become good friends. Tien Goku and Piccolo will serve as 3 characters or perspectives that we care about fighting in the championship. surely there will be more characters involved but the audience should be focusing on whether Tien Goku or Piccolo loses.
I feel good about this
moving on --
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Post by shagg on Jan 12, 2016 18:12:47 GMT
Goku is locked in eye contact with piccolo. But snaps out of it to realize Bulma is talking as he glances to Bulma Bulma: "Oh. now you're awake!"-- Gokudouble takes back to Piccolo, Piccolo is long gone. Bulma can be heard in the back: "Hey! What! Just so you know --" Bulma's talking is muffled by Goku's thought: "I dont know who he is. But I get the feeling he will be an important person in this tournament."
EXT. COLISEUM FRONT DOORS bulma and goku walk outside of the center coliseum front doors, towards the street. as flows of people enter through the entrances next to theirs. Bulma is frustrated Goku didnt answer her earlier. "come on Goku!.... well fine! whatever he is, he sure is one ugly-" just as NIMBUS comes swooping in front of them. BAH! - explains Bulma Hiding behind Goku now, she peers over to see an orange cloud carrying a woman on all fours, head facing down, shaking scared. Then almost from out of nowhere, a small boy with a funny hat jumps, with his arms wide open, off the top of the cloud screaming "Daddy! Daddy!" Goku catches him laughing : "hey hahah Gohan! You made it!" Look at the scared woman on NIMBUS, she gets enough strength and stability to turn her sick-green face to Goku... but leans over to the other side and pukes
Goku steps away and reveals Bulma "Chi Chi! Gohan! This is my friend Bulma! I met her on the way here!" Bulma is wide eyed looking at the goofy boy, sick mother, and the orange cloud-- close up to Bulma, as she thinks "that cloud... I saw that cloud on the way here... right before I met Goku..."
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